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['Kite']

What's left to say?

One of the nicest things I've seen in a while.
I'd love to see you top it.
:)

Pierson responds:

Cheers for taking the time to comment and for watching! I'll try make something else soon, perhaps a little shorter though!

[Attack!]

Great concept

There's a lot to work with here. The girl and her megamouth - Thats Funny.
Keep it up, I say.

Araelyn responds:

Well thank you very much :D
I like how I basically advertised myself for you to watch this haha

[Research]

interesting

Not much going on, of course, but I like those little microscope creatures. One seems to be tortured and the other seems like he's very ill. I find it interesting.

Todination responds:

You do...?
I, my good sir, do not...!

[My Robotic Inspiration]

Yes, this is cool as hell

Totally wacky, a tight groove, and super cool animation. What more can one ask for?

AKS9 responds:

someone could ask for a review like yours, and get it :)

[The Paper Prince]

I think it's funny

Hits: I like the quirky, naive style. The animation is not pro but interesting to me. While I agree with others that this is a familiar theme, I found it very funny and charming. Almost seemed like a satire of the lonely loser theme.
Misses: I was far more interested in his real life than his origami day dream. I agree that the ending felt rushed.
I enjoyed meeting this character and feeling his pain but in the end I couldn't really understand his motivation.
This is a tricky thing to fix, but my honest opinion is that you should rethink his whole motivation and what his goal is. I get it, but I'm not FEELING it. Hope this helps - if not for this, maybe the next one.

ernest-aka-gooey responds:

Now I think I get what you're saying... BUT I probably don't have it in me to try and rework such a major aspect of this animation.
I will definitely keep those ideas in mind for the next one.
Aha I think it's kinda good in a way... in a way... that you like his real life more just 'cause well, that's what most of the story is. The dream is but a small part...
I said this in a previous response but I think the.. lack of understanding his motivation comes from HOW I ended up developing the end. I had trouble thinking of how to get the character to arrive at the decision he made.
Thanks for the review

[Wanted To Be A Ghost]

Really good.

Good story, well paced, and funny.

ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:

Thank you. :)