What's left to say?
One of the nicest things I've seen in a while.
I'd love to see you top it.
:)
What's left to say?
One of the nicest things I've seen in a while.
I'd love to see you top it.
:)
Cheers for taking the time to comment and for watching! I'll try make something else soon, perhaps a little shorter though!
Just like a real show
I didn't laugh out loud, but I find the whole thing very well done. The jokes are standard, well timed and amusing. The characters are strong and well defined both conceptually and artistically. Animation is very good. Voice acting is recorded well and the actors are very professional.
Great concept
There's a lot to work with here. The girl and her megamouth - Thats Funny.
Keep it up, I say.
Well thank you very much :D
I like how I basically advertised myself for you to watch this haha
interesting
Not much going on, of course, but I like those little microscope creatures. One seems to be tortured and the other seems like he's very ill. I find it interesting.
You do...?
I, my good sir, do not...!
Yes, this is cool as hell
Totally wacky, a tight groove, and super cool animation. What more can one ask for?
someone could ask for a review like yours, and get it :)
I think it's funny
Hits: I like the quirky, naive style. The animation is not pro but interesting to me. While I agree with others that this is a familiar theme, I found it very funny and charming. Almost seemed like a satire of the lonely loser theme.
Misses: I was far more interested in his real life than his origami day dream. I agree that the ending felt rushed.
I enjoyed meeting this character and feeling his pain but in the end I couldn't really understand his motivation.
This is a tricky thing to fix, but my honest opinion is that you should rethink his whole motivation and what his goal is. I get it, but I'm not FEELING it. Hope this helps - if not for this, maybe the next one.
Now I think I get what you're saying... BUT I probably don't have it in me to try and rework such a major aspect of this animation.
I will definitely keep those ideas in mind for the next one.
Aha I think it's kinda good in a way... in a way... that you like his real life more just 'cause well, that's what most of the story is. The dream is but a small part...
I said this in a previous response but I think the.. lack of understanding his motivation comes from HOW I ended up developing the end. I had trouble thinking of how to get the character to arrive at the decision he made.
Thanks for the review
Really good.
Good story, well paced, and funny.
Thank you. :)
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