Disturbingly Entertaining
I like the hap-hazzard style and gruesome satire
Disturbingly Entertaining
I like the hap-hazzard style and gruesome satire
Really good.
Good story, well paced, and funny.
Thank you. :)
Huh?
Hits: Animation, Artwork, music is very good indeed. Particularly the show opener sequence.
Misses: Some of the humor was delivered too dryly for my taste. I don't really understand the characters' motivation. Perhaps there is none?
Cute
Very Cute. I like the classic elements you've included, but try giving your little guy some motivation.
Funny
I don't know anything about DB but I chuckled heartily at this fun animation!
Not bad...
Hey, I'm a stickmenfightinghater. But I hope you understand that it isn't the actual stickmen fighting that most of us don't like. it's the meaningless battles that turn us off. Now this My Birthaday animation approaches some kind interaction between the stickmen besides creative violence, turning them from just stickmen into characters.
I am not trying to persuade you to change your approach to expressing yourself (as there are obviously plenty of people who enjoy stickmenfighting) - I'm just pointing out that if the characters are on a journey - they can be balls and squares, stickmen, whatever - they are now fighting for something and there is some kind of satisfaction for "the mainstream" and stickmenfighting fans as well.
Am I wasting your time telling you something you know perfectly well?
Cute and Nifty
OK, so this isn't going to change anybody's life, but it is very nice.
Hits: I really like the reveal of the meaning of the clock and the anchor was a nice metaphorical touch. The song is also very nice.
Misses: Why isn't the song credited? The story does not accurately reflect the theme of the song (this is not to say that it doesn't work well with the MUSIC in the song). The animation is adequate but not very inspiring. I don't understand the signigicance of the fish (perhaps there is none?).
Interesting...
As with all your stuff, this shows real potential. It is stupid but creative and interesting. Perhaps you will continue to grow as an artist and really impress us.
Or maybe you'll just abandon your talent and be a fat lazy old man who used to play with flash when he was a kid. We'll see what happens...
Stick figures fighting?
The animation is excellent, but at the end of the day it's just stick figures fighting.
I guess I "just don't get it" - Good work though. Nice collaboration.
Creepy, funny
I like your drawing style and character designs. The animation is pretty good - but you could loosen it up a bit by not isolating so much. Your efforts would benefit greatly from a solid story line.
I am a cartoon man.
Age 56
2D Animation
California
Joined on 5/9/09